First draft film opening feedback

In our feedback there was good shots like panning and close ups. People thought the narration was good because then people knew the plot. People liked the diegetic sounds, like the crunching of leaves, as it made it more interesting and realistic. The atmosphere matched the music that was played lightly in the background and there was an intriguing story line.

We was told that some shots were blurry and shaky, but we will re film some of these. Everyone said that our narrating was too fast and no clear, so we then went and re filmed the voice over, and made it slower and more understandable. People thought that the women that found the body, should have had some close ups of her reaction. The feedback we got was for the reaction of the women to be more realistic. We found that people was quite confused, as there was 2 dogs and you hardly saw the other dog and you didn't know where it came from.